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Which one reads like a system shift?

Hi Anj — thanks for your feedback on how shifts are worded in the Evidence Explorer. We've used your guidance document to test a new way of writing them, and we'd value your read on the result.

Below are 8 shifts from the Explorer. Each is shown two ways. We've shuffled the order, so Version 1 and Version 2 could be either the current wording or the new one. For each pair, pick the one that reads more like a system shift to you.

Both wordings are shown exactly as they are — one is word-for-word what the Explorer holds today, the other is a machine-written draft that a reviewer would check before publishing. We haven't trimmed or padded either. You can also open the evidence behind each shift as you go.

There are no wrong answers — your picks help us decide whether this change is worth making. It takes about 5 minutes, and your answers save in your browser if you need to come back.

Which one reads more like a system shift to you?
Version 1
Version 2
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